Just like how a writer can combine sentences, a writer can also expand sentences.

We can expand short sentences by adding specific details.

The details should be colorful words that give the reader an exact picture of how something looks, sounds, or tastes. These details can also tell more about how something moves or feels.

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A dove is a symbol for peace.

A flying white dove is a symbol for peace.

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The children are playing under the tree.

The children are playing in a circle under the tree in the sun.

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The cake was delicious.

The sweet watermelon cake was delicious.

How to expand sentences:

  1. Look for sentences that do not give a clear picture of your idea.
  2. Think of describing words that give a more exact picture.
  3. Add these words to your sentences.

Exercises

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